NIPA Exhibition 2020 (
Digital Images Only
N I P
Northern Ireland Photographic Association
PDI - Cloisters by Stephen Jordan (8 marks)
Shorts Camera Club
The sunlight along the tiled floor is well balanced and retains the detail in the tiles.
I feel I would like to see more of the arch ways in the cloisters especially on the right of the image to bring that symmetry that is wanting to be photographed into view.
I feel that even though it is not currently present but a nun or holy father walking along the cloisters would add to this image and give it more purpose and meaning as all the elements of light, reflections, archways and spirit would be combined.
At present I find there is great detail in the stone work and the leading line of sunlight flooring brings your through the cloister, but it just needs that focal point at the end to capture the viewer. - Matthew